Kathleen, great job sharing your faith journey. We all have our own path of faith and spirituality, like you my kids were no longer attend a church, but I have witnessed their faith in their compassionate, generous, kind and loving actions...they are connected to God but in their own way.
This is beautiful! My Mom was raised in the Catholic church and went to Catholic school from Kindergarten through 8th grade. I know that she relates exactly to what you have said about the nuns.
Thank you sharing your heartfelt poem Kathleen. It is a beautiful expression of your connection to God. Well done! 👏. I hope you have a great week. ❤️🤗
Wow, Kathleen. This could have been written by my own mother. She was a devout Catholic and I broke her heart (not ever meaning to). She never could come to terms with my following another path. I so admire you for being able to accept that your daughters’s choice. Finding one’s spiritual path is not easy. Thank you for sharing this. This challenge is particularly difficult for me.
Thank you Barbara I appreciate your words. As I said to someone else here, there is so much more to this story, but I couldn't tell it all here in one poem. It was not an easy time, but we got through it!!!!🙏🏻🙏🏻
I thought last week was my favorite challenge prompt until I got to this week. There is nothing more meaningful in my life than my relationship with God. This poem is about a time when I was struggling to feel His presence. When I was at the end of me, I found Him.
In the silence it came.
In the space between when I spoke and when I heard,
the absence of noise left room for the knowing.
In the quietude of soundless waiting
came the revelation of understanding.
I am not my own. I am an empty vessel
longing to be filled with infinite love
and peace that surpasses logical thought.
When the questioning, speaking, pleading paused,
before the answer was imparted,
came cognizance and comprehension.
Awareness of my inadequacy and frailty
ushered in the surrender of my own will.
Awash with inconceivable acceptance
and intimate affection that opened my soul,
only then did I feel you pour into that parched vessel.
Cathey, as I was reading your poem it took me back to a time in my life when I was lost, was deeply hurting and felt like I was all alone. I later came to realize God was walking beside me the whole time, guiding me to through that struggle, when I finally said, I can't do this anymore, felt his loving presences through prayer.
Oh Cathey this is absolutely beautiful! I could mirror my own feelings with yours! After losing my own 21 year old daughter I was close to being totally destroyed. My heart was shattered and my self worth was tested over and over. My faith was challenged constantly. My husband and beautiful son helped me to remember God’s enduring love was always with me. I found great solace in nature, reading, quiet reflection time and prayer. You just shared a big part of your journey and it was somewhat reminiscent of mine. I truly thank you for doing so. Blessings to you sweet Cathey.
Karen, I'm so sorry to hear you lost a child. It is the most painful thing to endure. I'm glad you found comfort in your faith then and continue to now. Thank you for your kind words.
Cathey, this poem really touched my heart as I thought of times I have felt empty and uncertain. God was always there in the silence, speaking in a whisper. Beautiful job.
The past few days, I have been reflecting on my spiritual path and how I deepen my connection to God in my daily life, what do I do to grow within myself, to deepen my connection. Last night I wrote this poem of the different ways I maintain and expand that connection.
Love this Linda! You have provided us with many things to ponder! You have stirred within my soul many areas to improve upon. Thank you for sharing a well thought out list! Blessings to you.
While at first I I thought I wasn’t ready to share my poem this week as it is very personal, I changed my mind as I was inspired and motivated by all the beautiful poems that everyone has written and shared so I decided to get out of my comfort zone and share my poem. I actually wrote two poems but decided to share the poem that reflects my journey through grief, loss and the spiritual growth that can emerge from a challenging time which for me was the loss of my parents and the fact that I wasn’t there to say goodbye to them when they passed away still feels heavy in my heart.
Week 4
“Unsaid Goodbyes “
In the quiet of the evening, shadows softly creep,
Two hearts once vibrant,
now in eternal sleep.
A tapestry unraveled,
threads of love unwind,
In the space between the moments,
I seek what I can find.
Whispers of their laughter,
like echoes in the air,
Haunt the halls of memory,
a love beyond compare.
Yet, as the weight of absence presses heavy on my soul,
I search for signs of solace,
a way to feel whole.
The sun dips low, a golden hue,
A reminder of the warmth they brought to all they knew.
In every gentle breeze, in every tear that falls,
I sense their spirit guiding me, through these shadowed halls.
Unsaid goodbyes linger, like a song without a tune,
Regrets and heavy burdens, beneath a silvered moon.
But in this sacred stillness,
I find a flicker of light,
A flicker of their wisdom, in the darkest of the night.
For love does not surrender,
nor does it fade away,
It transforms into a presence,
in the dawn of every day.
Though the ache is ever-present, like waves upon the shore,
In grief, I find connection, in love, I find much more.
So I lift my heart in prayer, to the stars that shine above,
To the spirits of my parents, wrapped in endless love.
In the journey of my sorrow, I learn to spread my wings,
To honor their sweet memory, through the joy that living brings.
And though my heart feels heavy, and the path is steep and long,
I carry them within me; their love will be my song.
In every step I wander, in every dream I chase,
I find them in the stillness, in the warmth of their embrace.
I carry their spirit, though goodbye's never clear,
In the depths of my heart,
they are always near.
So I'll honor their memory,
in each tear that I shed,
And find strength in the love that they endlessly bred.
Though the weight of their absence feels heavy and wide,
I'll cherish the moments, and keep them inside.🙏❤️
Irene….what a beautiful tribute to your loving parents. Your words brought tears to my eyes as I can relate to all that you shared. Your parents’ bright light shines right through to their daughter and they will always be with you.
Irene this is absolutely beautiful. You have expressed your feelings with so many beautiful words. I loved reading it. I was not there when my mother passed away. It is a regret that still lives in my heart,even after so many years. You are blessed with so many beautiful memories to cherish. 👏👏🙏🏻💜
Your poem was beautiful, Irene. The love and loss you feel for your parents was so evident and brought me to tears. What a blessing to have you as their daughter😪❤️
Thank you Juliann, I almost didn’t share it but I decided to get out of my comfort zone show up and participate like all of you since it is the last weeks challenge.
This is beautiful Irene. Thank you for sharing with us. In your words we see the special love and connection you have with your parents, a love that we see lives on in you. ❤️🤗
Irene, this is so beautiful, a very loving tribute to your parents. I feel your words deep inside my heart as I have also lost my parents. I believe the people we love so much are always by our side.
Dia , I certainly relate to your sentiment of not knowing. I too have struggled with this challenge. I have made several attempts to figure it all out. Maybe be should get together to answer our questions. I have never worked so hard to find my answers.
Dia, the line "what do I do now mode", took me to back to some challenging times in my life when I questioned my faith and feeling alone. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and speaking from your heart.
Dia,you spoke from your heart,I get what you are saying. I appreciate your thoughts. Spirituality is in the eye of the beholder. Thanks for sharing!!!!😊❤️
It takes guts to express something you never have before. Thank you! And I find the way you have continued to ask questions and move through life's challenges to be really inspiring.
Your words are so honest Dia. So expressive. I understand so well the logical brain. My brain is always looking for logic until it isn’t. Thank you for sharing your heart with us. I hope you have a good rest of your week. ❤️🤗
After reading Graham's invitation to this week's challenge, going through the exercises, crying for a few minutes as I reflected on the most challenging time in my life, when I felt like God had abandoned me, I came to realize He was with me, I just couldn't see it at the time. As I was thinking about that time, I now know there were angels sent from God that helped carry me through the difficult time.
Angels Sent From Above
Huddling on the corner of the bed
Sobbing from deep within, hard to breathe
He's gone too soon, I can't do this alone
Friend walks in, holds my hand
"I'm here for you, just breathe
God sent an angel
Have to call my kids, need to do it myself
Going to be so hard to tell them Dad is gone
Make the calls, breaks my heart
Crying, crying, can't stop
Feel loving hands on my back
God sent an angel
For months, everyday a struggle
Wake up, go to work, come home
Just make it through the day
Nothing left inside, feeling lost
Two year old grandchild says
"Grammie, come play with me
God sent an angel
Family, friends, loving support
Still feeling alone, just holding on
Silent time at spiritual retreat, emotional release
I completely understand the emptiness. I lost a baby about 15 years ago and the pain was so hard. I prayed so much during that time. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem. My Dad has lung cancer that has spread to his liver and I fear when I am going to get this dreaded phone call from my Mom, but I will pray as always. I simply love your poem.
Patty, I so admire the fact that you can still find joy in the fellowship of your church community , despite the fact that you don’t always agree with its rules or opinions. I left my faith community as I found its rules and practices were more stiffing than nourishing . Thank you for sharing.
Well done Patty. I shared some of your thoughts. My story, as I told it is just a small part. There was so much more to that, but I couldn't make my poem too long, so I hit the highlights.
Thank you, PD, for sharing your thoughts. I love how you expressed yourself and especially your last line of the greatest gift bringing you home. Blessings! ❤️🤗
This resonated with me. I have grown in recent years around what church means to me and my relationship with God is more profound than ever. Thank you for sharing!
Jane, thank you. I believe I feel what you are trying to convey, and it means a lot!
When you shared your poem on the live Writer’s Challenge follow up event, I also felt very touched by the way you seemed to channel your pain and loss into living in a way that honored the love you and your husband shared. I could relate to that. Much love to you!
Wow Breaha -this just touched my heart so. I'm sorry about your brother and I know the pain of that loss. I had 6 siblings and we have only lost 1 sister so far, but I know how much that hurts. Your words let me know how much you loved your brother. I'm trying hard to articulate something here and I just can't find the words. This was a beautiful and heartbreaking tribute to your brother. Unfortunately life doesn't always turn out like we hope it will, but all we can do is our best and try to make the right decisions and live our lives as best we can. Loved this my friend and you are very brave for sharing. (I would put a lot of hearts here, but I still haven't figured out how to add emojis to my post)
This is such a beautifully written story of the sorrow of losing your dear brother. It made me very emotional as I am very close to my sisters so I know the bond you had. The good memories you shared will always be stored in your heart. ❤️
Thank you, Juli. Yes, it was the most difficult day of my life. I miss my brother deeply. I can also now see the profound growth and spiritual strength I have cultivated through choosing to feel and heal, rather than suppress my pain and grief. I frequently think of Journey with a grin or laughter, and certainly still feel his love.
This poem, A Leap of Faith, reflects one of the most significant moments in my life—the decision to leave behind a 50-year accounting career and trust fully in God’s plan for the next chapter. Through reflection and prayer, I revisited this moment as part of an exercise to connect deeply with the theme of spirituality. It was God’s grace, His unwavering presence, and the strength He provided that made this leap of faith possible.
Thank you Graham for the writing challenge. This week's challenge is very special to me. The others were as well, but this one is my favorite, as I embrace this new chapter in my life where I'm constantly learning and growing so much.
A LEAP OF FAITH
I can’t tell you why this chapter must close,
Turn the page, trust God’s plan that only He knows.
The weight you’ve carried now calls for release,
Step forward in faith, and you’ll find His peace.
The familiar feels safe, but trust in His way,
His perfect timing will guide you each day.
Your heart may tremble, yet His voice is clear,
“Be bold, my child, for I am near.”
Grieve what you’re leaving, the life you have known,
Believe that His seeds of new growth have been sown.
Thank you for sharing and I relate as someone who left the classroom about five years ago right before the pandemic. Trusting in Him is a leap of faith.
This is a beautiful expression of your journey and where you are this moment and this place and time. You are where you were led! Your faith is so strong. Thank you for sharing with us. 🤗❤️🙏
So beautiful Anne. God does guide us to make the decisions we need to make. In your case, you have absolutely followed God and made the right decisions. You are in such a good place right now. Congratulations!!!!!🙏🏻😊❤️
My favorite poetry is like this, Bie. It conveys such powerful feelings, and is a gift because we learn from something difficult you experienced. We are able to experience the blessing without personally going through the challenge. I hope you continue to feel the love embracing you as you find your way.
This challenge has been amazing. Thank you, Graham, for your inspiration and support. Thank you to all the members for your encouragement along the way. 🤗❤️
The Woven Voice
Feeling alone against the great expanse of existence
Accepting the loneliness, the reality that smallness is self discovery
Suddenly overwhelmed with a sense of connection to something greater
A sacred connection woven into the fabric of God’s divine plan
Following God’s guidance with purpose and mindfulness
Awakening to inner self, fears dissolving in prayer
Complacency becomes change, doubts become courage
Trust and surrender side by side with faith and resilience
Alive with purpose a voice that cannot be contained
Embracing the inner peace of divine presence
A heart of service, a path ahead reflecting God’s love
Amazing gratitude and joy alive with spiritual growth
My voice heard from a soul nourished by divine wisdom
My voice born of self love and unmerited grace
My voice woven with others into the tapestry of God’s divine plan
The woven voice of my journey of faith, connection and strength
This is really beautiful Linda, I have taken a screenshot and saved it in my files so I can go back and reread again whenever I want to. I hope that you don't mind ?
Thank you very much Irene. I don’t mind at all if you save it, in fact I am humbled and it brings me joy. When I write I always hope my words will touch the reader. I hope you have a great rest of your week and again, Thank you. ❤️🤗
Thank you very much Valdelice. This challenge has been amazing for me. I have enjoyed all the comments and inspiration. I wish you a great rest of your week. ❤️🤗
Linda Jane,well spoken. A good read for me. I am glad you we're able to connect to what you see as the divine. I grew up in a Catholic home. I went to a Catholic school. I married a Catholic. I raised my girls, catholic, there has never been anything different in that respect in my life. My girls saw something different in their life, and I had to accept that. I am really enjoying reading everybody's comments here today.
Thank you very much Kathleen. We have our upbringing in common. I grew up Catholic and went to Catholic school all the way through high school. Then I married a beautiful man studying to be a minister and who then went on to serve as a military chaplain. It was a bit of an adjustment. My faith has already been such an important part of my life. You are so correct in how much inspiration and enjoyment there is in reading all the comments here. I wish you many blessings Kathleen! ❤️🤗
Thank you very much Anne. I am glad you could connect with it. I hope as I write that it will touch someone, as your writing does. This week’s thoughts flowed for me. I love the subject. Enjoy the rest of your week! ❤️🤗🙏
As you so often do, you expressed your thoughts and feelings so beautifully, Linda. What a wonderful description of your relationship with God that I feel and relate to!
Thank you very much Cathey. This challenge has been so interesting. I have learned a lot about myself. I hope you have a good week and see you on Tuesday Creations. ❤️🤗
This weeks challenge is by far the best one, it is giving me goosebumps as I read through the prompts. I just wanted to take a moment to express my gratitude for the challenges you've presented in this writing exercise. Your prompts have truly inspired me and sparked a lot of creativity.
I appreciate the depth and thoughtfulness you've put into the exercises for week 4 and I want to give them the attention they deserve. I may need a little extra time to fully engage with the prompts and craft my responses, but I'm excited to dive in and explore the possibilities.
Thank you Graham for this amazing opportunity ! Hopefully the celebration live will be on zoom so more people will be able to join in the fun and share their thoughts and experiences from this challenge!
I especially like the last lines of this poem, Elizabeth. When we come to the place that we can give thanks for the lessons learned that give meaning to life, then we can fully enjoy the relationship with our Creator. Beautiful expression of your faith!
I was going to write something in the form of a poem but decided I needed to give a more detailed story.
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I was trying to remain positive during my grandson's heart surgery and I needed to reassure his parents that everything was going to be ok as they dealt with a very scary situation for their newborn baby. I prayed for all of them constantly and prayed for myself to stay strong for them. There were so many "what ifs" during this little infant's open heart surgery and then a few months later brain surgery. Prayed. Prayed. Prayed. Prayed without ceasing. I prayed for God to guide the doctor's hands to heal this little baby.
Fast forward 13 years --
Kyle is a teenager now with a healthy, strong, caring heart and is an Honor Roll student. Never underestimate the power of prayer. Every once in a while, he will text me positive verses from scripture. I smile when I read them. There is no doubt in my mind that he heard my silent prayers when he went through his medical struggles. Last year when he went for his heart check-up, he learned that his surgeon was retiring and thanked him for saving his life. The doctor looked at him and said "God saved your life, I only helped." This is a profound statement from a top surgeon at Children's Hospital in Boston. He told Kyle that his surgery is written up in text books because of the outcome of this delicate surgery. Miracle? Of course it was. God hears our prayers. Angels were all around the operating room that day. In closing, I want to share a quote I read as it is a good reminder to all of us:
"Prayer is the most powerful weapon against trials; the most
effective medicine against sickness; the most valuable gift
to someone you love."
--Anonymous
May we all continue to have faith in times of struggles and never stop praying.
GAIL, I just now saw this and finished reading it. What a beautiful piece wrote so beautifully. What a challenging time that had to be for you and all your family. He survived two very difficult invasive surgeries. Prayer definitely makes a difference. I loved reading the doctor's response. When your grandson thanked him for saving his life and he said, no, God saved your life, I just helped. Thank you so much for sharing this. It was a very heartfelt, lovely story.👏👏👏👏🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
This is such a heartwarming and touching story of faith, strength and the power of prayer. May God continue to bless Kyle and your family, Gail. Thank you for sharing your story and the amazing quote. ❤️🤗🙏
January Writing Challenge
Week # 4
Thank you, Graham, for this challenge.It gave me the push that I needed.
Spirituality, from my point of view and my experiences. It won't be the same for everyone.
Raised in a Catholic Italian family
Catholic grade school was great
I attended grades one through eight
The pledge of allegiance and prayers every morning
Even at a very young age
God and my Catholic faith relate
Back in those days
Catholic schools were staffed by nuns.
Holy Family School which I attended
Staffed by the Sisters of Mercy
I found the nuns at times to be scary
As I grew older it happened rarely
I married a sweet Catholic fella
We shared our religious faith together
Raised our three daughters
To have a strong faith.
A strong belief in God
To this day still
Going to church on Sunday
Has a special meaning for me
Years passed by and my young girls.
Grew up to be young adults
Something changed through the years
It hurt my heart deeply
Two of my daughters
Are no longer going to church
They are good, educated, talented young women
The choice is no longer mine
It is theirs and theirs alone
Through them, things have shifted a bit for me
I have come to realize
It is not necessary to attend church
To be a good Christian person
Take a walk in the woods
Speak to God on your journey in your own way
Be awakened to new ways
You can connect to God.
Attending mass on each Sunday
Singing with my church choir
Something I have done for many years now
Is an enlightening, beautiful religious experience for me
Prayer and music come together for me
It is not the same for everyone
I do appreciate and love Those who see spirituality
In a different way.
Kathleen Ludwig 01/22/25
Kathleen, great job sharing your faith journey. We all have our own path of faith and spirituality, like you my kids were no longer attend a church, but I have witnessed their faith in their compassionate, generous, kind and loving actions...they are connected to God but in their own way.
Thank you Linda,you make me feel good. You and I have discussed this subject more than once. Good conversation!!!!🙏🏻🙏🏻
Great job Kathleen , you wrote this so fast and it is so well written!
Thank you, Irene. I actually have been working on it for a few days but I finished it last night.
This is very well written and expressed with so much love!
This is beautiful! My Mom was raised in the Catholic church and went to Catholic school from Kindergarten through 8th grade. I know that she relates exactly to what you have said about the nuns.
Thank you Amy!!
I love your thoughts about church and how you can accept the decisions of your daughters.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful reflection. ❤
I loved how you expressed your spiritual journey Kathleen!
Thank you Anne.❤️🙏🏻😊
Very well done. I could go on for days talking about this topic. Continue what works for you and respect what works for others.
Thanks Audrey,there is so much more to this story,but I feel like I hit the highlights.
Thank you for sharing your spiritual journey, Kathleen! 💗🙏
Thanks Cathey I appreciate that. There really is so much more to this story, but I couldn't elaborate here so I tried to hit the highlights.❤️🙏🏻
Thank you sharing your heartfelt poem Kathleen. It is a beautiful expression of your connection to God. Well done! 👏. I hope you have a great week. ❤️🤗
Thank you so much, Linda. I appreciate your kind words.❤️🙏🏻
Wow, Kathleen. This could have been written by my own mother. She was a devout Catholic and I broke her heart (not ever meaning to). She never could come to terms with my following another path. I so admire you for being able to accept that your daughters’s choice. Finding one’s spiritual path is not easy. Thank you for sharing this. This challenge is particularly difficult for me.
Thank you Barbara I appreciate your words. As I said to someone else here, there is so much more to this story, but I couldn't tell it all here in one poem. It was not an easy time, but we got through it!!!!🙏🏻🙏🏻
Thank you Kathy!!!
I thought last week was my favorite challenge prompt until I got to this week. There is nothing more meaningful in my life than my relationship with God. This poem is about a time when I was struggling to feel His presence. When I was at the end of me, I found Him.
In the silence it came.
In the space between when I spoke and when I heard,
the absence of noise left room for the knowing.
In the quietude of soundless waiting
came the revelation of understanding.
I am not my own. I am an empty vessel
longing to be filled with infinite love
and peace that surpasses logical thought.
When the questioning, speaking, pleading paused,
before the answer was imparted,
came cognizance and comprehension.
Awareness of my inadequacy and frailty
ushered in the surrender of my own will.
Awash with inconceivable acceptance
and intimate affection that opened my soul,
only then did I feel you pour into that parched vessel.
There was the answer.
In the silence it came.
Cathey, as I was reading your poem it took me back to a time in my life when I was lost, was deeply hurting and felt like I was all alone. I later came to realize God was walking beside me the whole time, guiding me to through that struggle, when I finally said, I can't do this anymore, felt his loving presences through prayer.
Yes!! That describes my experience to a t! Thanks for sharing that, Linda.
Oh Cathey this is absolutely beautiful! I could mirror my own feelings with yours! After losing my own 21 year old daughter I was close to being totally destroyed. My heart was shattered and my self worth was tested over and over. My faith was challenged constantly. My husband and beautiful son helped me to remember God’s enduring love was always with me. I found great solace in nature, reading, quiet reflection time and prayer. You just shared a big part of your journey and it was somewhat reminiscent of mine. I truly thank you for doing so. Blessings to you sweet Cathey.
Karen, I'm so sorry to hear you lost a child. It is the most painful thing to endure. I'm glad you found comfort in your faith then and continue to now. Thank you for your kind words.
Beautiful words, Cathey. God is right along side of us at all times.
Even when we don't feel him. 💗
I love that the answer come in the silence. Another excellent poem.
Thanks, Dia!
Your poem beautifully expresses your awareness of the higher power in your life.
Thank you, Juli!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. It is a reminder that sometimes the noise of the world keeps us from connecting with ourselves.
This is a wonderful writing. WOW. Thank you for this.
Thanks so much, Robin. Glad you liked it.
Wonderful job Cathey! I could definitely feel how this experience with God felt to you.
Thanks, Anne!
WOW,Cathey that was beautiful!!!!!👏👏👏
Thank you, Kathleen! I appreciate your "WOW"! 😊
Your words evoke so much emotion, so much suffering ending in hope. Beautifully written. Thank you! ❤️🤗
Thanks, Linda. ❤️🙏 See you on Tuesday Creations!
Cathey, this poem really touched my heart as I thought of times I have felt empty and uncertain. God was always there in the silence, speaking in a whisper. Beautiful job.
Thank you, Leigh! It could well be a universal feeling. We just need to be reminded sometimes that we’re never alone. ❤️
Thank you, Kathy! I am glad you enjoyed it. Writing it reminded me that if I get quiet, I feel His presence more deeply.
January Writing Challenge: Week #4
The past few days, I have been reflecting on my spiritual path and how I deepen my connection to God in my daily life, what do I do to grow within myself, to deepen my connection. Last night I wrote this poem of the different ways I maintain and expand that connection.
Watching, learning
Seeking, finding
Peace with my inner self
Nature walks
Quiet dawn, morning glow
Blessings of the day
Hush of dusk, peace
Sunrise, sunset times
Clearing mind to hear
Opening heart to receive
Resting in silence
Mediation provides
Gratitude list of blessings
Brain dump end of day
Poetry writing, sharing thoughts
Journal entries
Growing, deepening
Calm, peace. harmony
Prayer, divine connection
Spiritual growth
I love the ways you describe the times you find your connection to God. It’s a reminder that he is everywhere we are. Wonderful job.
I love how there is a hushing like feeling at dusk. Watching the sunrise and sunset are beautiful and it's like a hushing feeling definitely.
So much added to your spiritual growth!
Especially the past 3 years..
I wish I could fine the perfect words for my poems as well as
You do. You are a master
You are so kind Juliann, comes from my heart.
Beautiful poem, Linda! Your words give me a sense of serenity and peace ❤
Wow, beautiful! Thank you for sharing Linda! 🙌🏻🙏🏻❤️🥹
I can truly feel these steps. "Resting in silence" truly resonates and touches me. Great job Linda.
Beautiful Linda. So descriptive. You are so good at using the right words to tell your story. I applaud you!!!👏👏
"Hush of dusk" - so descriptive, I could see it, feel it, and hear it.
As usual Linda, very well done.
This is such an amazing list of connecting and growing. Well done. Thank you for sharing it Linda. I hope you have a good week. ❤️🤗
Love this Linda! You have provided us with many things to ponder! You have stirred within my soul many areas to improve upon. Thank you for sharing a well thought out list! Blessings to you.
Beautiful and peaceful expression of your feelings, Linda.
While at first I I thought I wasn’t ready to share my poem this week as it is very personal, I changed my mind as I was inspired and motivated by all the beautiful poems that everyone has written and shared so I decided to get out of my comfort zone and share my poem. I actually wrote two poems but decided to share the poem that reflects my journey through grief, loss and the spiritual growth that can emerge from a challenging time which for me was the loss of my parents and the fact that I wasn’t there to say goodbye to them when they passed away still feels heavy in my heart.
Week 4
“Unsaid Goodbyes “
In the quiet of the evening, shadows softly creep,
Two hearts once vibrant,
now in eternal sleep.
A tapestry unraveled,
threads of love unwind,
In the space between the moments,
I seek what I can find.
Whispers of their laughter,
like echoes in the air,
Haunt the halls of memory,
a love beyond compare.
Yet, as the weight of absence presses heavy on my soul,
I search for signs of solace,
a way to feel whole.
The sun dips low, a golden hue,
A reminder of the warmth they brought to all they knew.
In every gentle breeze, in every tear that falls,
I sense their spirit guiding me, through these shadowed halls.
Unsaid goodbyes linger, like a song without a tune,
Regrets and heavy burdens, beneath a silvered moon.
But in this sacred stillness,
I find a flicker of light,
A flicker of their wisdom, in the darkest of the night.
For love does not surrender,
nor does it fade away,
It transforms into a presence,
in the dawn of every day.
Though the ache is ever-present, like waves upon the shore,
In grief, I find connection, in love, I find much more.
So I lift my heart in prayer, to the stars that shine above,
To the spirits of my parents, wrapped in endless love.
In the journey of my sorrow, I learn to spread my wings,
To honor their sweet memory, through the joy that living brings.
And though my heart feels heavy, and the path is steep and long,
I carry them within me; their love will be my song.
In every step I wander, in every dream I chase,
I find them in the stillness, in the warmth of their embrace.
I carry their spirit, though goodbye's never clear,
In the depths of my heart,
they are always near.
So I'll honor their memory,
in each tear that I shed,
And find strength in the love that they endlessly bred.
Though the weight of their absence feels heavy and wide,
I'll cherish the moments, and keep them inside.🙏❤️
Irene….what a beautiful tribute to your loving parents. Your words brought tears to my eyes as I can relate to all that you shared. Your parents’ bright light shines right through to their daughter and they will always be with you.
Thank you Gail 🙏💜
Irene this is absolutely beautiful. You have expressed your feelings with so many beautiful words. I loved reading it. I was not there when my mother passed away. It is a regret that still lives in my heart,even after so many years. You are blessed with so many beautiful memories to cherish. 👏👏🙏🏻💜
Thank you Kathleen, this is something that is always in my thoughts 🙏💜
Absolutely beautiful ❤️! I can sense their deep love for one another.
So very beautiful and touching, Irene.
Thank you Barbara:)
I'm so glad you chose to share your loving and beautiful words with us.
Your poem was beautiful, Irene. The love and loss you feel for your parents was so evident and brought me to tears. What a blessing to have you as their daughter😪❤️
This is beautiful Irene. You had me in tears. Thank you for sharing. 💝
Thank you Anna 🥲🙏💜
Wow what a beautiful tribute to your parents, I love it and thank you for sharing Irene now in tears .💜
Thank you Lucy for your encouragement 🙏💜
Irene your ability to write beautiful poems is a wonderful gift. You are a painter of words.
Thank you Juliann, I almost didn’t share it but I decided to get out of my comfort zone show up and participate like all of you since it is the last weeks challenge.
You are my encouragement Irene.
Irene this is truly beautiful your poem tell us the heartache but such love you carry inside and honor them both so deeply
Thank you Shari 🙏
This is beautiful Irene. Thank you for sharing with us. In your words we see the special love and connection you have with your parents, a love that we see lives on in you. ❤️🤗
Thank you Linda 🙏
Beautiful poem Irene! The love of your parents is alive in your heart ❤
Thank you Elizabeth!
Irene, this is so beautiful, a very loving tribute to your parents. I feel your words deep inside my heart as I have also lost my parents. I believe the people we love so much are always by our side.
"I Don't Know, I Don't Know, I Just Don't Know"
Week #4 was a doozey. And a little cathartic. I don't think I've every expressed this before.
“I don’t know who makes the rules. We just play the game.”
My dad’s quote to me as he drove me home from
Birthing a sweet baby boy
Instead of bringing a baby home
I held a small mint green box in my lap
“Dia, its cancer. But it is the best one to have.”
That scary word you don’t want to hear
“Dad had a heart attack in his sleep.”
Oh sh*t!
Each time my logic black & white brain
Went into “what do I do now mode”
What steps do I/we have to do now?
What is the process?
Where is my spirituality in all of this?
IDK
I trust my gut
What guides my gut?
IDK
Years of attending a Christian Science Church
Didn’t seem to assist
Years of attending a Presbyterian Church
May have assisted
If I look down and witness these challenges
Something cared for me
Something offered me love
Something held me together
Something walked with me to the other side
What was it?
IDK
I’m still searching
Maybe as the gray increases on the top of my head
I will lose a bit of my black & white, logical brain
And I can find that something
Until then, “Dad, I don’t know who makes the rules either."
Dia , I certainly relate to your sentiment of not knowing. I too have struggled with this challenge. I have made several attempts to figure it all out. Maybe be should get together to answer our questions. I have never worked so hard to find my answers.
Us black and white girls have a challenge. Great idea - two brains are better than one.
Dia, the line "what do I do now mode", took me to back to some challenging times in my life when I questioned my faith and feeling alone. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and speaking from your heart.
Thanks Linda.
Dia,you spoke from your heart,I get what you are saying. I appreciate your thoughts. Spirituality is in the eye of the beholder. Thanks for sharing!!!!😊❤️
It takes guts to express something you never have before. Thank you! And I find the way you have continued to ask questions and move through life's challenges to be really inspiring.
I love your poem. I don't always know what to do either.
Thank you for sharing your honest feelings. ❤
Thank you!
Your words are so honest Dia. So expressive. I understand so well the logical brain. My brain is always looking for logic until it isn’t. Thank you for sharing your heart with us. I hope you have a good rest of your week. ❤️🤗
Thanks Linda. Honesty is always the best policy! Have a good week, too.
So honest and raw and real. Thanks for being open with your feelings and experiences.
I don't know any other way to be! ;-) Thanks.
It's a journey for sure! Thank you.
January Writing Challenge: Week #4, Poem #2
After reading Graham's invitation to this week's challenge, going through the exercises, crying for a few minutes as I reflected on the most challenging time in my life, when I felt like God had abandoned me, I came to realize He was with me, I just couldn't see it at the time. As I was thinking about that time, I now know there were angels sent from God that helped carry me through the difficult time.
Angels Sent From Above
Huddling on the corner of the bed
Sobbing from deep within, hard to breathe
He's gone too soon, I can't do this alone
Friend walks in, holds my hand
"I'm here for you, just breathe
God sent an angel
Have to call my kids, need to do it myself
Going to be so hard to tell them Dad is gone
Make the calls, breaks my heart
Crying, crying, can't stop
Feel loving hands on my back
God sent an angel
For months, everyday a struggle
Wake up, go to work, come home
Just make it through the day
Nothing left inside, feeling lost
Two year old grandchild says
"Grammie, come play with me
God sent an angel
Family, friends, loving support
Still feeling alone, just holding on
Silent time at spiritual retreat, emotional release
Feel God's presence, saying I am here
Praying hands surround me, hold me, lift me up
God sent angels
Broken heart slowly heals, faith deepens
God sent angels in time of need
Never alone, divine walks beside me
Trust, listen, pray, love is always there
In my mind, in my heart, I know
God is always with me
Linda, I just want to give you a hug! How about tomorrow? 😎🥰
What a beautiful poem. I could feel your grief, as well as the gift of all of the angels that were there with you. Thank you for sharing, Linda.
Thank you Breaha
I completely understand the emptiness. I lost a baby about 15 years ago and the pain was so hard. I prayed so much during that time. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem. My Dad has lung cancer that has spread to his liver and I fear when I am going to get this dreaded phone call from my Mom, but I will pray as always. I simply love your poem.
Thanks for sharing linda. Soo heartfelt. 💝
So heartfelt and bittersweet.
Thank you for sharing your feelings! God and the angels were present at all times, giving you support and strength.
This is a beautiful writing, I could walk right into this with you. Thank you for sharing.
As always Linda , you did a great job. You have a great way of expressing yourself. This is a very heartfelt poem :)
Thanks Irene, it came from my heart this morning.
I have known that deep loss and even though it seemed unbearable, I never felt alone. I feel the heartbreak in this. Thank you for sharing.
It was a very dark time in my life, I really struggled for 2 years.
WOW Linda, you knocked that out of the park. it probably doesn't take much to have all those memories flash back at you. So heartfelt!!!!!
Thank you Kathleen, there were some tears as I was writing it.
Heartfelt and beautiful. Thank you for sharing. I love the angels from God by your side! So comforting. I wish you blessings Linda! ❤️🤗🙏
A poem full of true feelings! ❤️🥹🤗
Thank you, Kathy, at the time I didn’t see the angels,it was through reflection I was able to recognize their presence.
Week #4 Spirituality
I know right from wrong; my mama taught me.
I know right from wrong; I read the Bible.
I know right from wrong; I go to church.
What my Mama taught me may no longer apply in 2025.
I may not always understand the Bible.
I love the fellowship of my church,
But sometimes I don’t agree with denomination rules.
Undeniably, there is a higher power spirit within me.
I fervently believe there is in everyone.
Every time I truly listen - It may be to mine, and it may be to yours,
The Holy Spirit within me, God’s greatest Gift, brings me home.
Patty, I so admire the fact that you can still find joy in the fellowship of your church community , despite the fact that you don’t always agree with its rules or opinions. I left my faith community as I found its rules and practices were more stiffing than nourishing . Thank you for sharing.
Wonderful ditty Patty. I love how you share your gifts
Great job Patty!
High praise, coming from a published author! Thanks, Anne.
Well done Patty. I shared some of your thoughts. My story, as I told it is just a small part. There was so much more to that, but I couldn't make my poem too long, so I hit the highlights.
Thank you, PD, for sharing your thoughts. I love how you expressed yourself and especially your last line of the greatest gift bringing you home. Blessings! ❤️🤗
Thank you so much, Linda Jane!
This resonated with me. I have grown in recent years around what church means to me and my relationship with God is more profound than ever. Thank you for sharing!
Your simple words speak volumes, PD. I love this!
You make my heart sing, Ms. Breaha!
That is the sweetest thing to say. The feeling is mutual!
Love this, Patty
How nice of you, Gail. Thank you!
Beautiful poem Patty! ❤
Thank you, Elizabeth!
Beautifully written Patty 🙏💜
Thank you, Irene
Your support means a lot!
Thank you, Kathy! I think we have thoughts in common.
January Writer's Challenge - Week 4
JOURNEY
There were a lot of hallways
then a set of double doors.
When I saw the unmistakable form
of my brother's body,
green sheet pulled to his shoulders,
distinct jaw, nose, closed eyes,
I heard someone wail,
"no!"
and realized it was my voice
echoing around us.
I could barely breath,
for the stone in my stomach, the squeezing of my chest.
I would never again see
my soul's light reflected back to me
in my brother's chocolate brown eyes.
A shaking finger grazed his cheek
and shot back from the cold as if it had been burned.
Longing to hold him,
I entwined my fingers in his tousled hair,
closed my eyes,
and was suddenly, simply,
still.
Love, like the depths of an ocean
enveloped every crevice of my being,
deep, dark, silent,
and somewhere out of sight
sunlight danced and twinkled
on the surface.
I knew I would not drown in the pain.
I loved my brother too much.
"Journey,"
I promised
"I will bring my agony, grief and longing
to this love.
I will feel as deeply and painfully as I must
to heal.
So someday, I can see you as you are,
in the beauty of the sunrise,
in the grin of my future child;
so I can feel you
in the embrace of sunlight on my skin,
and the playful lap of waves upon my feet.
Even if the thought of you brings a tear to my eye,
it will also bring a smile to my face."
Opening my eyes,
I let the silky strands of hair go,
and knew that it would be unspeakably difficult,
but I could keep my promise.
Because the love my brother and I share
transcends any human experience.
Jane, thank you. I believe I feel what you are trying to convey, and it means a lot!
When you shared your poem on the live Writer’s Challenge follow up event, I also felt very touched by the way you seemed to channel your pain and loss into living in a way that honored the love you and your husband shared. I could relate to that. Much love to you!
Wow Breaha -this just touched my heart so. I'm sorry about your brother and I know the pain of that loss. I had 6 siblings and we have only lost 1 sister so far, but I know how much that hurts. Your words let me know how much you loved your brother. I'm trying hard to articulate something here and I just can't find the words. This was a beautiful and heartbreaking tribute to your brother. Unfortunately life doesn't always turn out like we hope it will, but all we can do is our best and try to make the right decisions and live our lives as best we can. Loved this my friend and you are very brave for sharing. (I would put a lot of hearts here, but I still haven't figured out how to add emojis to my post)
This is such a beautifully written story of the sorrow of losing your dear brother. It made me very emotional as I am very close to my sisters so I know the bond you had. The good memories you shared will always be stored in your heart. ❤️
That close sibling relationship is such a gift, isn’t it? Yes, I cherish the memories. 💛
So beautiful!
Heartfelt poem, full of emotion and healing.
So beautiful ❤️🙏
So heartfelt!!! Beautifully written. So difficult to experience. 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
Thank you so much, Kathleen. 💛
Your poem is so poignant. It must have been so difficult for you.
Thank you, Juli. Yes, it was the most difficult day of my life. I miss my brother deeply. I can also now see the profound growth and spiritual strength I have cultivated through choosing to feel and heal, rather than suppress my pain and grief. I frequently think of Journey with a grin or laughter, and certainly still feel his love.
Beautiful heartfelt expression of loss, a deep connection, love, and hope in moving forward. Thank you Breaha, for sharing your story with us. ❤️🤗
I’m grateful for you and this space where it is safe and healing to share personal experiences. 💛
This poem, A Leap of Faith, reflects one of the most significant moments in my life—the decision to leave behind a 50-year accounting career and trust fully in God’s plan for the next chapter. Through reflection and prayer, I revisited this moment as part of an exercise to connect deeply with the theme of spirituality. It was God’s grace, His unwavering presence, and the strength He provided that made this leap of faith possible.
Thank you Graham for the writing challenge. This week's challenge is very special to me. The others were as well, but this one is my favorite, as I embrace this new chapter in my life where I'm constantly learning and growing so much.
A LEAP OF FAITH
I can’t tell you why this chapter must close,
Turn the page, trust God’s plan that only He knows.
The weight you’ve carried now calls for release,
Step forward in faith, and you’ll find His peace.
The familiar feels safe, but trust in His way,
His perfect timing will guide you each day.
Your heart may tremble, yet His voice is clear,
“Be bold, my child, for I am near.”
Grieve what you’re leaving, the life you have known,
Believe that His seeds of new growth have been sown.
With each small step, your courage will rise,
A journey unfolding beneath open skies.
This leap of faith is a walk into His grace,
Where His love surrounds and fear has no place.
His strength surrounds you, His wisdom will lead,
Providing each answer, fulfilling each need.
So keep moving forward, for He lights your way,
His promise of purpose grows clearer each day.
With every decision, His faithfulness shows,
A life of abundance is the one He bestows.
I love this, Anne, a wonderful expression of your journey with God by your side.
Thank you!
Thank you for sharing and I relate as someone who left the classroom about five years ago right before the pandemic. Trusting in Him is a leap of faith.
It’s definitely is a leap of faith and trusting God with each decision large or small is essential.
I do love the poems you write. I envy your ability to rhyme.
Thank you Juliann!
A beautiful message of Faith and trust in God's plan.
Thank you Elizabeth!
This is a beautiful expression of your journey and where you are this moment and this place and time. You are where you were led! Your faith is so strong. Thank you for sharing with us. 🤗❤️🙏
Thank you Linda. I do appreciate it.
So beautiful Anne. God does guide us to make the decisions we need to make. In your case, you have absolutely followed God and made the right decisions. You are in such a good place right now. Congratulations!!!!!🙏🏻😊❤️
Thank you Kathleen! Journey is still on going while I'm leaning so much. It's going at His pace and not mine. I appreciate this so much.
This is a great reflection of how we must come to the decision that we let faith lead in everything we encounter in life.
Thank you Cathey!
Thank you Kathy!
Darkness and pain
My head losing control
My soul so numb
But outside the birds are fluttering
A robin stares at me
I look back
until I close my eyes
In the silence, I hear a whisper
Let go.... Let go...
and follow me
I take a deep breath
and see a bright light
A warm embrace
Love
From deep inside a faith wells up
I am taken care of
I am not alone
I am in peace
Thank you for this writing challenge, Graham! It helps me a lot🙏🌱✨
Beautiful words, Bie,❤️
My favorite poetry is like this, Bie. It conveys such powerful feelings, and is a gift because we learn from something difficult you experienced. We are able to experience the blessing without personally going through the challenge. I hope you continue to feel the love embracing you as you find your way.
Bie,your poem is beautiful. Thanks for sharing!. I know you recently lost your Mom. 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
Bie this is wonderful! These are powerful words and beautifully written.
A serene and lovely poem, Bie.
Beautiful Bie 💝
Thank you for this beautiful poem Bie! ❤
Your words bring such peace and comfort, Bie. Blessings! ❤️🤗🙏
This challenge has been amazing. Thank you, Graham, for your inspiration and support. Thank you to all the members for your encouragement along the way. 🤗❤️
The Woven Voice
Feeling alone against the great expanse of existence
Accepting the loneliness, the reality that smallness is self discovery
Suddenly overwhelmed with a sense of connection to something greater
A sacred connection woven into the fabric of God’s divine plan
Following God’s guidance with purpose and mindfulness
Awakening to inner self, fears dissolving in prayer
Complacency becomes change, doubts become courage
Trust and surrender side by side with faith and resilience
Alive with purpose a voice that cannot be contained
Embracing the inner peace of divine presence
A heart of service, a path ahead reflecting God’s love
Amazing gratitude and joy alive with spiritual growth
My voice heard from a soul nourished by divine wisdom
My voice born of self love and unmerited grace
My voice woven with others into the tapestry of God’s divine plan
The woven voice of my journey of faith, connection and strength
A lot of thought put into this one. God has certainly connected with you in regards to your writing abilities.
Thank you very much Audrey. ❤️. I hope you have a great rest of your week! ❤️🤗
Thank you
Beautiful words expressing your journey of faith. Your writing is always a blessing for me.
Thank you so much Leigh! I hope you have a great rest of your week. 🤗❤️
Beautiful poem, Linda. It was very inspirational and I loved reading about your strong faith.
Thank you very much, Gail, for your kind words . I am glad you liked it. This week’s subject was a favorite of mine. Blessings to you! ❤️🤗
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem! Your words are a reflection of your spiritual journey and your connection with God.
Thank you very much Elizabeth. I appreciate your comment so much. I hope your week is going good. ❤️🤗
Linda, I appreciate your words on your relationship with God.
Thank you very much Juliann. I hope you have a good rest of your week. ❤️🤗
This is really beautiful Linda, I have taken a screenshot and saved it in my files so I can go back and reread again whenever I want to. I hope that you don't mind ?
Thank you very much Irene. I don’t mind at all if you save it, in fact I am humbled and it brings me joy. When I write I always hope my words will touch the reader. I hope you have a great rest of your week and again, Thank you. ❤️🤗
What a beautiful and inspired poem Linda! Thank you for sharing! 🙌🏻❤️
Thank you very much Valdelice. This challenge has been amazing for me. I have enjoyed all the comments and inspiration. I wish you a great rest of your week. ❤️🤗
You're welcome Linda! Have a great rest of the week too! 🙏🏻❤️
Linda Jane,well spoken. A good read for me. I am glad you we're able to connect to what you see as the divine. I grew up in a Catholic home. I went to a Catholic school. I married a Catholic. I raised my girls, catholic, there has never been anything different in that respect in my life. My girls saw something different in their life, and I had to accept that. I am really enjoying reading everybody's comments here today.
Thank you very much Kathleen. We have our upbringing in common. I grew up Catholic and went to Catholic school all the way through high school. Then I married a beautiful man studying to be a minister and who then went on to serve as a military chaplain. It was a bit of an adjustment. My faith has already been such an important part of my life. You are so correct in how much inspiration and enjoyment there is in reading all the comments here. I wish you many blessings Kathleen! ❤️🤗
Well done Linda. I can feel so much of myself and my own journey in these words.
Thank you very much Anne. I am glad you could connect with it. I hope as I write that it will touch someone, as your writing does. This week’s thoughts flowed for me. I love the subject. Enjoy the rest of your week! ❤️🤗🙏
As you so often do, you expressed your thoughts and feelings so beautifully, Linda. What a wonderful description of your relationship with God that I feel and relate to!
Thank you very much Cathey. This challenge has been so interesting. I have learned a lot about myself. I hope you have a good week and see you on Tuesday Creations. ❤️🤗
Linda, an inspiring poem of your spiritual journey of faith and connecting through that faith with God and his wisdom. Thanks for sharing, well done.
Thank you so much Linda. I have enjoyed this challenge and I look forward to reading everyone’s thoughts. Enjoy your week! ❤️🤗
This weeks challenge is by far the best one, it is giving me goosebumps as I read through the prompts. I just wanted to take a moment to express my gratitude for the challenges you've presented in this writing exercise. Your prompts have truly inspired me and sparked a lot of creativity.
I appreciate the depth and thoughtfulness you've put into the exercises for week 4 and I want to give them the attention they deserve. I may need a little extra time to fully engage with the prompts and craft my responses, but I'm excited to dive in and explore the possibilities.
Thank you Graham for this amazing opportunity ! Hopefully the celebration live will be on zoom so more people will be able to join in the fun and share their thoughts and experiences from this challenge!
I did a second poem on a very emotional time in my life for week four and I truly believe in angels
A Memory Etched in Time
In 2002, a year of sorrow and pain,
My father's passing left an eternal stain.
Hospice care, a final resting place,
Family by his side, a loving, gentle space.
His faith, a beacon, shining bright and true,
A Catholic convert, with a heart anew.
He practiced his faith with devotion and might,
A guiding light for our family, through day and night.
That final evening, I sat by his side,
Watching, waiting, as his breathing slowed with time.
The room was dark, except for stars up high,
A celestial show, as the angels drew nigh.
I dozed, then woke with a start, to a heavenly sight,
Flashing lights, like tiny stars, in the dark of night.
His breathing stopped, his pulse, a memory of the past,
I called the family, and our priest, to come and pray at last.
In that moment, I knew, I witnessed something divine,
Angels descending, to take him to heaven's shrine.
A memory etched, forever in my mind,
A glimpse of the divine, a love beyond all time.
1/22/2036
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Beautiful Sheila. 💝
This is so heartfelt and beautifully written Sheila. I am so glad you shared your precious memory with us. ❤️🤗
Thank you, Linda.
Sheila this is so beautiful! I felt so much peace as you described your last moments with your dad.
Thank you, Leigh so appreciate your kind words.
Beautiful words, Sheila. A beautiful memory.
Lovely writing, Sheila
Thank you, Linda. Appreciate your kind words.
You have painted a touching story with your beautiful words.
Thank thank Juliann!
Beautiful poem Sheila! Your words express love and faith, despite the most difficult times ❤
Thank you, Elizabeth!❤️
Sheila that was so beautiful, so well written. Your words telling a beautiful story. I thank you for sharing this with us!!!!❤️🙏🏻
Thank you, Kathleen. I always appreciate your kind words.
I share my poem from the January Writers' Challenge: Week 4
Beside you, Lord
I have had moments of pain in my life,
moments when my heart was breaking.
But you, Lord, have always been by my side,
helping me to put the broken pieces back together.
Throughout my journey you have held my hand,
you have given me strength in my moments of sadness.
You have taken care of me and kept me from getting hurt,
you have filled my life with hope and love.
You are the wonderful light that guides my path,
you shine brightly in every step I take.
You fill my heart with sincere trust,
you drive me forward with faith and determination.
I promise you Lord to always listen your guidance,
showing love and compassion in every moment of my life.
To be patient in the face of difficulties,
and stand firm in the face of challenges.
I thank you, Lord, for the blessings that enrich me,
for each day you give me, for all the lessons I have learned.
Because in every experience that gives meaning to my life,
I find in you my peace and my guidance.
Your poem is a beautiful tribute to your faith
Thank you for your kind words, Juliann! ❤️
Wonderful expression of faith!
Thank you Leigh! ❤
I love your expression of how strong your faith is, Elizabeth. Beautiful writing.
I appreciate your kind words! Faith is very important to me. ❤
Elizabeth, the last line is the best, also like the “ you are wonderful light that guides my path. Well done!
Thank you Linda! ❤
This is beautiful Elizabeth. I love the way it flows and tells of your deep faith. Thank you for sharing it with us. Blessings! ❤️🤗
Thank you for your kind words! I am very glad to share my Faith ❤
I especially like the last lines of this poem, Elizabeth. When we come to the place that we can give thanks for the lessons learned that give meaning to life, then we can fully enjoy the relationship with our Creator. Beautiful expression of your faith!
Thank you for your comment, Cathey! Faith is a precious gift that connects all of us ❤
¡Guau, Elizabeth! Qué hermoso poema lleno de fe y sentimiento. Que Dios siga iluminando tu camino y guiando tu corazón dondequiera que vayas. 🙏🏻🙌🏻✨
¡Agradezco tus hermosas palabras! Un abrazo grande 🤗
🤗😘
January Writer's Challenge - Week 4
Spiritual Strength and The Power of Prayer
I was going to write something in the form of a poem but decided I needed to give a more detailed story.
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I was trying to remain positive during my grandson's heart surgery and I needed to reassure his parents that everything was going to be ok as they dealt with a very scary situation for their newborn baby. I prayed for all of them constantly and prayed for myself to stay strong for them. There were so many "what ifs" during this little infant's open heart surgery and then a few months later brain surgery. Prayed. Prayed. Prayed. Prayed without ceasing. I prayed for God to guide the doctor's hands to heal this little baby.
Fast forward 13 years --
Kyle is a teenager now with a healthy, strong, caring heart and is an Honor Roll student. Never underestimate the power of prayer. Every once in a while, he will text me positive verses from scripture. I smile when I read them. There is no doubt in my mind that he heard my silent prayers when he went through his medical struggles. Last year when he went for his heart check-up, he learned that his surgeon was retiring and thanked him for saving his life. The doctor looked at him and said "God saved your life, I only helped." This is a profound statement from a top surgeon at Children's Hospital in Boston. He told Kyle that his surgery is written up in text books because of the outcome of this delicate surgery. Miracle? Of course it was. God hears our prayers. Angels were all around the operating room that day. In closing, I want to share a quote I read as it is a good reminder to all of us:
"Prayer is the most powerful weapon against trials; the most
effective medicine against sickness; the most valuable gift
to someone you love."
--Anonymous
May we all continue to have faith in times of struggles and never stop praying.
Gail, what a beautiful tribute to God and the miracle of Kyle's health. Love this so much my friend.
Thank you, Jane. Thank you for always encouraging me and thank you for our special friendship. Love you! ❤️🙏
GAIL, I just now saw this and finished reading it. What a beautiful piece wrote so beautifully. What a challenging time that had to be for you and all your family. He survived two very difficult invasive surgeries. Prayer definitely makes a difference. I loved reading the doctor's response. When your grandson thanked him for saving his life and he said, no, God saved your life, I just helped. Thank you so much for sharing this. It was a very heartfelt, lovely story.👏👏👏👏🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
Thank you, Kathleen. It’s a very shortened version of Kyle’s story but prayer certainly helped through every challenge. 🙏
Thank you for sharing Gail. What a beautiful story.
Thank you, Juliann. I’m happy you enjoyed reading it.
That wax beautiful Gail. 💝
Thank you, Anna.
This is such a heartwarming and touching story of faith, strength and the power of prayer. May God continue to bless Kyle and your family, Gail. Thank you for sharing your story and the amazing quote. ❤️🤗🙏
Thank you for your heartfelt response, Linda. 🙏❤️
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story of hope and Faith. God is always with us. ❤
Thank you, Elizabeth. Yes…..He Is.
Thank you for sharing your heartfelt thoughts. It brought tears to my eyes reading this. God bless Kyle and all your family 🙏💜
Thank you, Irene, for your kind words. It really means a lot. ❤️🙏
My poem for week 4 writing challenge, touched my heart as I was writing it.
My Life is Nothing Without You
Soaring on wings like eagles,
whisper on the wind,
reaching out a hand,
quiets a coming storm.
It's the simple pleasures,
a dewdrop on a blade of grass,
an unfolding flower,
gazing at an ancient tree.
It's not about finding answers,
it's embracing the truth,
the vast unknown that stretches
beyond our realization.
In the quiet moments,
search deeper within,
for whispers of your love,
a guiding light.
Look into my heart,
there lies the simple truth,
the breath of grace,
that fills each day with purpose and peace.
Bowing down in spirit and truth,
I find strength in surrender,
my heart lifted to the heavens,
wings unfurling,
soaring in the embrace,
of Your endless compassion.
You are the center of my life,
the anchor in a storm,
turning chaos into harmony,
You are my refuge,
my hope,
my everlasting song.
Each step taken,
each prayer whispered,
a testament of the love,
that holds me close,
for I am nothing without You,
a vessel of grace,
reflecting Your light,
into the world.
Life and truth,
kindness and love,
a dance in Your presence,
a deep spiritual intimacy with God.
So soar like an eagle,
be tenderhearted and thoughtful,
let go of anger, forgive,
immersed in peaceful repose,
I am spiritual
I am alive,
I have a sacred bond with God.
By Mia Ball 1/22/2024
Mia, beautiful testimony to your journey with God and your faith,
Your poem is so beautiful Mia.
Beautiful poem Mia! ❤
Mia, that was so beautiful and so enlightening. A distinct everlasting power for you!!!❤️🙏🏻
Your words are so vivid in expressing your deep faith and your connection. Beautiful! Thank you for sharing with us. ❤️🤗
"Strength in surrender" - that is so true for me, too.