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Linda Lubitz's avatar

Graham, spent few days last week with this one. Woke up one morning with “ are you watching” in my head, jotted it down , went for walk, wrote few more lines, on morning of anniversary of husband passing refined my thoughts. As I wrote it, there was a feeling of love and peace as my faith reassured me his spirit is around us.

Watching From Above

Are you watching ?

How your spirit lives

Carried in our hearts

Memories as stories shared.

Are you watching?

Your son throw a line in the water

To remember fishing together.

Are you watching?

Your daughter when she listens

To your favorite music.

Are you watching?

Grandkids you never knew

See photos and say “ it’s Grampie”

I believe you are watching.

Always missed, always remembered!

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Jan Stoneburner's avatar

Have had fun refining this poem since last week -- from my days as a school counselor

"Mrs. Stoneburner,

There was a problem in the cafeteria."

A defiant teenager stood in my doorway

In her steely suit-of-armor

Two turbulent eyes staring at me

Through her helmet of shiny black hair

Her hard voice echoed off my office walls

Like heavy metal.

“I don’t want to fight anymore. But

My mother says I’m only a loser if I don’t.”

I brushed aside her long bangs.

“My Brave Girl,

You are my hero today.

I’m proud of you for walking away.”

I saw her mother’s sharp barbs

Magically dissipating into thin air

And a beautiful, blue-eyed Soul

Emerging from fissures in her armor

FREE

No longer an

Iron Butterfly

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